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I yelled at you once.

I screamed at the top of my lungs "I love you".

But the only time you really pay attention to what I'm saying, is when I whisper.  

So you didnt hear me.

 

You laid on your left side one night.

I pushed myself up against you, hoping you were sleeping.

I put my lips to your ear and whispered this time. "I love you."

I felt the fuzz on your ear stand up.

I felt the goose bumps on your arm. 

 

I woke you up the next morning.

You hadnt the slightest idea of what I was talking about

and said that the goose bumps were obviously caused from the cold front. 

 

I saw you today for the first time in two and a half years.

You walked into the grocery store the same time I did.

To your left, was a little girl tugging at your jacket.

 

I watched you check out.

I whispered (praying you would somehow hear) "I love you"

and you looked up, directly at me.

You smiled.

"I heard you the first time."  

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