Rave of the Century
Verse 1: At the rave of the century
For Mississippi blue eyes, like you
You smiled in your long, white tee
As the strobe lights bounced off your skin
You said a kind word, nodded yes
And accepted him into your body
Chorus: I lose sight of your languid eyes
As the music bumps and beats
These already broken teens
Verse 2: I started smoking at the rave of the century
Too bad you wouldn't notice
Since you were off fulfilling childish fantasies
As I sat and pondered
© Ricks-on-fire
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Noble Orange
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on 07/27/09 at 10:23 PM
You say pondered when you sang it.
I like pondered.
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