tango of strangers & lovers

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how odd

a chance encounter

(un)

expected surprise

      known face

      til now

 

  

 

   that point in time

which forever alters

   this present

as I knew it            as you knew it

 

as we know it

 

parallel             lives

shape a notyetexistent reality

(so fragile)

yet eager

to write stories, even in silence,

unfolding truths

 

a tango of

strangers   &   lovers

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on 04/17/08 at 10:35 PM

This is really very nice.  It captures the feeling of a shared passion for words, even as it creates a tentatively flirtatious tone.  It starts out hesitant and full of surprise, but finds a stronger attraction toward the end.  The tango image reflects that perfectly... moving from initial attraction to cautious expression to seduction.  Nicely done.

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