tango of strangers & lovershow odd a chance encounter (un) expected surprise known face til now
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that point in time which forever alters this present as I knew it as you knew it
as we know it
parallel lives shape a notyetexistent reality (so fragile) yet eager to write stories, even in silence, unfolding truths
a tango of strangers & lovers © naoko
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on 04/17/08 at 10:35 PM
This is really very nice. It captures the feeling of a shared passion for words, even as it creates a tentatively flirtatious tone. It starts out hesitant and full of surprise, but finds a stronger attraction toward the end. The tango image reflects that perfectly... moving from initial attraction to cautious expression to seduction. Nicely done.Add a comment