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Yellow moon, blackened sky
leave spaces for white-tipped clouds

tomorrow rings
but it is not resonant
yesterday, too, once looked promising

The sun rises orange and sets in purple
always use your lighter colors first

Screams of passion, expressions of joy
Always uncalled for in retrospect

And the moon reappears before the sun completely steps out
every brush stroke is set as if in stone

those who chose not to learn
are those who haven't looked
but she is unforgiving, as watercolor always is

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on 10/23/07 at 04:55 PM

very colorful and promising.

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