he just held me so close

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he(just)
ld
m[(e) so : lc]

as i cried
rainstorm of tears

he(just)
ld
m[(e) so : lc]

as i was
falling

he(just)
ld
me hard

as to hold my fall(shak)ing

in(stillness)to(sureness of love)

he(just)
ld
m[(e) so : lc]

all night

in(until i fell safe)to(our dreams)

© naoko

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Jack Wood

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on 12/11/07 at 04:11 PM

creative stuff - i dig it.
celebrityscientist

749 points

on 12/09/07 at 12:06 PM

interesting style, i liked it

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