the very notion of beauty

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the very notion

 of beauty

frightens me

especially

when we

dance

 

object

//

subject

our feet

negotiate

our views

 

the very notion

of beauty

overtakes me

especially

when we

sleep

 

lover

//

lover

our feet

tangle

our dreams

© elva

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esqmsm

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on 10/10/07 at 05:06 AM

This is a wonderful little piece. I like your writing quite alot.
patric shaw

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on 10/03/07 at 05:56 PM

talented
seleneskye

178 points

on 10/02/07 at 09:10 AM

Thoughtful ~

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