Prism Dreams

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Through prism dreams I think in multicolor thought,

sparked red with desire

when crackling laughter ignites splendor.

 

We toast in hues of violet

while pink giggles slosh and gurgle

in an iridescent cup of delight.

 

Only after a yellow, orange glow disappears from sight,

do we drift into a silent world

of aqua blue.

 

 

© carrie dawn

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AngeGuardian

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on 11/06/08 at 11:10 AM

Well done, i like how the colors and feelings mesh so beautifuly! =)
lucy

on 07/09/07 at 08:27 PM

very beautiful.  love the color imagery.

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