A Marrow Ocean

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A Marrow Ocean II: Anorexic Apples

We drained our bones and slept alone at the bottom of a marrow ocean.
Tucked into the coral with the tin man and his orchestra, we were oiling hinges
with silent symphonies, but you wouldn’t ever know we were listening
to a whale make love to who ever was free and willing in motel rooms,
In a suitcase life between metropolitan settlements and rural reconstruction sites;
Where you’ll find
the most beautiful faces in a ghost town sewage system
sorting through recycled trash and anorexic apple cores
that have nothing left to offer anyone except their once refreshing  corpse,

 

Yeah okay.

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on 09/25/07 at 07:54 AM

I really like your images and the whale is a great interlude between the lovers and garveyard.

on 08/12/07 at 11:13 AM

thank you very much

on 06/29/07 at 11:21 PM

Tucked into the coral with the tin man and his orchestra, we were oiling hinges
with silent symphonies, but you wouldn’t ever know we were listening

Wonderfully written.  I think your work is under-appreciated on this site.  Regardless, I hope you know that your work is lovely. 

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